30 August 2009

I'm an alien




I'm an alien to myself,
Because, I often improvise my doings
I don't feel satisfied,
for whatever I have achieved
I don't stop at any point,
no matter how much resistance perceived

I'm an alien to my family,
Because, I am often misunderstood
I don't want to lead my life,
like a traditional business
I don't care about the definition of success,
that doesn't bring happiness

I'm an alien to the society,
Because, I often disapprove its norms
I don't discriminate people,
in the name of ideology, physique or possession
I don't love or hate people,
on the ground of color, language or religion

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They all stand still and stare at me,
as if I am from a different galaxy
But if I'm an alien,
don't we need more aliens in the society?

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15 Comments:

Alok said...

What a write! cleverly master minded poem. yes we do need a lot of rebels like you who believe in equality. good work once again. cheers, mate!

Mukesh on August 30, 2009 at 8:32 PM said...

What a great poem..I am totally speechless after reading this poem..as you have covered quite interesting points...I wish I can be part of alien's group.
Regards
Mukesh

सूर्य/सिकारु on August 30, 2009 at 11:46 PM said...

wow,how energetic poem ? really lovely. thnx for sharing such a nice poem.

Anonymous said...

so am i, but the trick is to be your best friend,

-richard

badri on August 31, 2009 at 7:23 AM said...

Deependra Jee,

Very good and intresting poem.

Sujan Sharma on August 31, 2009 at 10:44 AM said...

Wow!, yet another beautiful poem.

Great!!!

Jeevan on August 31, 2009 at 2:56 PM said...

Loved the last stanza a lot. Think I'm one of an alien too!

Dilip Acharya on September 2, 2009 at 9:42 PM said...

I'm an alien to the society,
Because, I often disapprove its norms
I don't discriminate people,
in the name of ideology, physique or possession
I don't love or hate people,
on the ground of color, language or religion


Simple,heart touching and yet very revolutionary. Once again you have proved that “Simplicity is the glory of expression”. Great composition.

Joomblo on September 3, 2009 at 8:32 PM said...

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Prelude on September 3, 2009 at 11:29 PM said...

Thank you very much for such a heart-penetrating poem, Deependra ji...This is my first visit to your blog and I concluded that my time was worth it! Wonderful pick-up!

R.K.Barnawal said...

I have gone over through many of your poems. But after reading this one, I can't stop myself commenting. It can stir anyone's mind............. Great....!!!!!!!!!!! Wish I can also an 'Alien'.

Asha on September 5, 2009 at 4:18 PM said...

what an expression ! simply great and awesome ...
pls dont mind you also sounded like autistic peoples who also doesnt care to world and do what they feel like to do without any risk, with no harm to anyone either they hate or love to people.. nothing does matter just they love and enjoy being in thier own world peacefully without any complain to none ..

AP said...

The last stanza is indeed thought provoking:

They all stand still and stare at me,
as if I am from a different galaxy
But if I'm an alien,
don't we need more aliens in the society?

I agree with you. we do need people like you who believe in the Utopian concept of unity. great write.

DEEPENDRA on September 8, 2009 at 6:01 PM said...

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. I am encouraged.

Dear Jeevan and Prelude, welcome to this blog. I am happy that you liked the poem. Hope to hear from you again.

Rishi, your comment came to me as a surprise. I am so pleased that you regularly follow my posts and liked this poem. I hope you are doing well. please accept my best wishes.

Asha ji, your views are always welcome. There is no reason why I should mind your comment as long as you give your feedback with a positive outlook.

Once again, thank you all.

pRiYaN...! on September 11, 2009 at 10:47 PM said...

wow !!! nice poem n post !!!

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