16 August 2009

Unconditional love





Whenever I’m in need,
you always stood by me
In the times of trouble,
during the moments of despair
You say, you’re my shadow,
that you will follow me forever

I love you so much,
but I hate shadows
Shadow grows and shrinks,
with fading light
I don’t want you to,
ever disappear from my sight

You urge me to be practical,
and come out of my illusions
Be someone real and strong,
don’t make castle of sands
As without a single warning,
life may slip from our hands

Nothing is timeless,
except the memories
Cherish every moment of togetherness,
and love without condition
because,
Love that comes with a reason,
may vanish with changing season

I agree with you as always
but do you listen to what my heart says?

(My poems also appear at http://www.poemhunter.com )


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12 Comments:

Sujan Sharma on August 16, 2009 at 12:34 PM said...

Wow!, another beautiful poem.
Very nice composition, a heart touching one !

Alok said...

In search of an eternal love! I liked your poem as always. The lines are specially touching.

Shadow grows and shrinks,
with fading light
I don’t want you to,
ever disappear from my sight

Cheers, mate!

आकार on August 16, 2009 at 8:25 PM said...

wow ! great piece...

Bed Nath Pulami on August 16, 2009 at 8:45 PM said...

"I love you so much,
but I hate shadows
Shadow grows and shrinks,
with fading light
I don’t want you to,
ever disappear from my sight "

its really touch in heart, nice words.....you are able to express your unconditional love.

Anonymous said...

well said. Love hurts and with conditions destroys. good one,

- richard

badri on August 17, 2009 at 7:15 AM said...

very nice!

Gyanendra said...

Great!!
I liked it very much!

Anonymous said...

A beautiful and touching 'conversation'. You sound a very well-matched couple - and it's an eloquent poem.

Mary

Sumiran on August 19, 2009 at 1:28 PM said...

Wonderful and very touchy sentiments. You always surprise me by your poems

Anonymous said...

whatz an impressive poetry...very touching and elegant.thank u for a graze poetry.

DEEPENDRA on August 23, 2009 at 5:43 AM said...

Thanks everyone for your wonderful, encouraging comments. and I look forward to hearing from you again.

Sahira said...

Superb........

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